10 pts..which of these two poem I wrote are better?

if you plan on giving one to a certain luck girl, i'd say go with the first one because it seems a little more romantic...but as a Creative Writing major, I really like the second one for the metaphores, and the senses you use, auditory and visual senses (ie crunching snow), and its what really brings a reader into the poem to see things and feel things how you do.